(Raman Hui) : Funny idea. The execution of the animation supported the idea and made it work. The animation could be more finished. The timing of the action could be a bit tighter too. But overall it was a strong piece of student work.
(Ken Law) : Action is ok but don't have some pause point. And there is too much strench of the face and head. It's no need for the whole animation. And need more time and effort to finish the whole story. Right now ending is too suddently.
(Ken Law) : Overall concept is ok and have creative.action smooth. But only the reaction of the magician jump out is not so clear what it represent. Maybe is the fire burn his hand, can add some action to make audience to know that.
(Ken Law) : Basically the animation sense is ok, but Idea is weak than clifford. Emotion of the magician can be larger and have more different to make the animation more interesting.
